Here's an attempt at what I was talking about with "scripts" of a sort.
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<td>--the inn/training--
I got a tip last night from my fence, Heartless Perry.
A nobleman named Lord Julian had some sort of quarrel
and showed up at a local inn well after nightfall
and in a foul mood.
He's carrying a velvet bag, about the size of a man's fist,
and it never leaves his sight.
Sounds likely to be valuable,
but I'll know for sure when I steal it from him.
Perry sent over a floor plan of the place, the Blue Heron Inn.
Finding His Lordship won't be hard,
his room number will be in the guest register,
if I can get to the front desk to read it.
The inn will have guards, but not as many as a private estate.
That should make things easy
– which is one of the reasons I'm willing to try it without
knowing for sure what the take will be.
Lord Julian is so protective of that bag,
there's got to be something of value in it.
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<td>- Perry and Garrett passing a note or
whispering under a lamp post.
-The fight between the two brothers (a la Judith)?
Zoom to: Julian gripping the bag in one hand
- the map,
Fade to: exterior of the Inn with guards
- Pull out from: Julian’s hand gripping the bag on a table;
to reveal Julian sitting pensively by the fire place.
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<td>--rutherford castle--
I had my fence take a look at Lord Julian's medallion.
Perry says the crest belongs to the Rutherfords,
one of the oldest so-called Great Families,
with a castle in South Quarter and a street named after them.
They've got a lot of wealth,
and a nasty reputation for turning on each other.
Based on that conversation I overheard,
Julian is definitely carrying on the family tradition.
Lord Ember, Julian's cousin, currently resides in the castle,
and Julian wants revenge.
Julian had a good plan -- hide inside a supply cart
and ride in after dark.
Then signal the cook to open the side door by
putting out the lion's-head torch in the courtyard.
A good enough plan for me to use myself.
That 'Bloodline Opal' sounds valuable, and it's
better off with me than sitting around in their vault.
But I can't get lazy. Ember will have his personal guard,
and doubtless a few other family tricks
in store for anyone who comes after the opal.
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<td>-Perry, wearing a jewelers glass, shows Garrett the crest.
-Fade from the medallion to a large crest
above the gate of Rutherford castle.
Details of this scene/image are focused on.
-a figure at a high window (Ember), or on the ramparts
-a supply cart about to be ushered through the gate with…
-a glimpse of Garrett in the back of the cart.
-erm…crossfade to version of the same image with
the gates now closed maybe…
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--south quarter--
South Quarter...one of the City’s most crowded residential
districts, in the center of town, near the river.
It’s not wall to wall nobility, like Auldale, but there’s
money here... if you know where to look.
South Quarter’s where I live, so I guess this is home.
As long as I behave myself, I can go anywhere
and do as I please and the residents won’t
give me any trouble. But the City Watch will.
The entire force knows what I look like,
and they’ll attack me on sight.
If I don’t stay out of the way of their patrols,
I might be looking at some jail time...or worse.
First thing I need to do is see my fence,
Heartless Perry - his shop is down in Black Alley.
I’m bringing Perry the Bloodline Opal.
I don’t want to hang onto this stone any longer
than I have to. Something about that job has
left me with a bad feeling...
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- cross faded montage of city streets, rooflines etc?
(hooray for detail)
-Pull out from the City Watch banner on a
wall to a stern faced guardsman
-Watchmen posting wanted poster of Garrett
-A face (Perry) peers though a crack in a door.
On the wall is seen the handprint mark
-Pull out from detail to wide in a picture of
Lady Elizabeth pipetting poison ingredients
in front of an array of vials
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It's fairly sparse, obviously. I was thinking start small and think of essentials then add. I could go hog wild with visionary director bollox, but that would not be a reasonable workload for anyone.
This is not supposed to be definitive by any means. Just a way to sketch out ideas for possible division of labour, "outsourcing" and so forth. Additions, subtractions, completely discarding everything is always a possibility.