Overlord Nexus on 26/8/2025 at 10:31

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Congratulations on the release! It's a neat little mission and I had fun.

thehardyboyz on 27/8/2025 at 14:48

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Just ghosted it on expert, short 220 loot. Took me around 1 hour to complete.
It was a very fun and enjoyable FM, especially considering it's your first one !
Second floor was very challenging to ghost because of patrols, other parts were pretty OK.

Good stuff :
- The Apple thing of course. Very fun, even if I thought it would be some optionnal quest
- The house in itself has an interesting level design. The dumbwaiter not being a route as often in FMs is pretty clever.
- Readables are well written

Things that may be improved :
- The outside and basement part are so empty and large for nothing. It felt a bit like a 2005 FM on that point. I suggest making places smaller or adding details
- The Apple Key location doesn't really make sense as said by other members before. However, finding this item in such a manner is very smart.
- Same bugs as others with bugged lady on top floor, standing still close to the dumbwaiter

In a word, it's a very solid first mission, I'd love to play more of your stuff in the future ! Thanks for the release :)