Al_B on 31/3/2010 at 20:09
Not sure why you didn't bite raph's hand off - that was a very generous offer. It might take a bit of work to clean up the html /css that it's generated but I've seen far worse.
Looks like you have put more effort into the site than quite a few others that have been posted and despite the imperfect English was at least entertaining to have a flick through. I would still recommend you correct the phrases "Now im glad" and "So all im saying" on the front page as they do stand out.
One possible future addition would be to look at the differences between the games - not just the similarities. Limiting yourself to those that are common between both games means that you're restricting the scope of what you're comparing. If one of your goals is to show to show all that each game can offer then this would, in my opinion, be something to explore.
LookAtYouHacker on 1/4/2010 at 13:27
Quote Posted by Al_B
Not sure why you didn't bite raph's hand off - that was a very generous offer. It might take a bit of work to clean up the html /css that it's generated but I've seen far worse.
Looks like you have put more effort into the site than quite a few others that have been posted and despite the imperfect English was at least entertaining to have a flick through. I would still recommend you correct the phrases "Now im glad" and "So all im saying" on the front page as they do stand out.
One possible future addition would be to look at the differences between the games - not just the similarities. Limiting yourself to those that are common between both games means that you're restricting the scope of what you're comparing. If one of your goals is to show to show all that each game can offer then this would, in my opinion, be something to explore.
A page that contrasts both games is a brilliant idea, I did have a page in mind that showed how they outranked each other in terms of dynamic game-play elements. I will also state that grammatical errors will be attended to. But in time, due to bandwidth usage.
AR Master on 7/4/2010 at 06:58
Do they teach kids to pluralize with apostrophes nowadays or what
LookAtYouHacker on 7/4/2010 at 16:10
Quote Posted by AR Master
Do they teach kids to pluralize with apostrophes nowadays or what
Don't you think its a little unfair to be slagging off someone's English grammatical skill's, when their not even English? Cut me some slack. Besides its not mind-numbingly bad, and Its definitely not as volatile as most of you have made it out to be. No, Its not THAT bad, it just needs some work.
Anyway I told everyone, Im buying some very flashy proofreading software. Also when I say flashy I mean flashy. Grammar is the building material for my information, some will always take the cracks and chippings more seriously than the overall architecture.
Al_B on 7/4/2010 at 18:14
Quote Posted by AR Master
Do they teach kids to pluralize with apostrophes nowadays or what
No - but I think they still encourage the use of the question mark when asking a question. ;)
Quote Posted by LookAtYouHacker
Cut me some slack. Besides its not mind-numbingly bad, and Its definitely not as volatile as most of you have made it out to be. No, Its not THAT bad, it just needs some work.
That's why raph suggested you have someone else cast an eye over it for you. I can't see where anyone has called it "mind-numbingly bad" or similar in this thread - both Koyla and raph made some positive suggestions.
LookAtYouHacker on 8/4/2010 at 00:15
Ok guys, you won't be hearing from me for a while. So, thank you for your mostly positive and helpful feedback. But, I’ve got some important stuff coming up. Not that anyone really cares of course, but just so you know in case you expect a response. See you.
