Please provide freedback on/proofread my essay before submitting

Renzatic on 30/9/2016 at 22:13

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faetal on 30/9/2016 at 22:52

Quote Posted by hedonicflux~~

I *hope* you will stick around to provide feedback on my next edit.

Unlikely.

Vivian on 30/9/2016 at 23:40

Also no one fucking uses the word elucidate, for fucks sake.

Vivian on 1/10/2016 at 00:03

Also if you're actually still looking for advice rather than comfort, grow a thicker skin and write for people who disagree with you.

Renzatic on 1/10/2016 at 00:06

Quote Posted by Vivian

Also no one fucking uses the word elucidate, for fucks sake.

I do sometimes, when I wanna sound like I'm smart.

Vivian on 1/10/2016 at 00:09

Elucidate this

Vivian on 1/10/2016 at 00:10

(I'm sticking my fingers up at you btw)

Renzatic on 1/10/2016 at 00:14

So you're, like, what? Jazz handing at me or something?

Vivian on 1/10/2016 at 00:20

Do you elucidate jazz hands?

Renzatic on 1/10/2016 at 00:22

If you don't clarify which fingers you're holding up, my only recourse is to assume all of them. Ergo, jazz hands.

Your post lacked the necessary levels of elucidation to inform me of your intentions.