Please provide freedback on/proofread my essay before submitting - by hedonicflux~~
Vivian on 29/9/2016 at 17:53
I don't think he's talking about you, goldmoon. Sorry to break it to you.
Goldmoon Dawn on 29/9/2016 at 18:16
Dont know what yer smokin' Viv, BUT I WANT SOME!!!!!
:ebil:
Vivian on 29/9/2016 at 18:47
Some shitty soap-bar stuff I found on the floor in Camden.
Goldmoon Dawn on 30/9/2016 at 13:47
Post #10 ITT
Quote Posted by Goldmoon Dawn
I am one of those strange people who wanted more. I wouldnt change a word! :)
Time passes with the usual TTLG drill, which is just as valid, and possibly even more so as a whole... which brings us to...
Post #24 ITT
Quote Posted by hedonicflux~~
I'll consider that, as well as the valuable opinions of Goldmoon Dawn and my most valued critic, who seem to think the essay is perfect as is.
Since I am seemingly the only member at TTLG who apparently feels this way, and I am also the only one here named goldmoon, I would say that, um... he was talking about me!?
Here is an intelligent place to start...
Read the thread before posting in it!
Im just saying...
And not only that, but you accuse the OP who put his heart out there in detail, of trolling?!?! In a thread you clearly arent even reading????
Viv...
Lets tighten it up some, eh?
;)
Thirith on 30/9/2016 at 14:05
Okay, Goldmoon Dawn, this is in the very first post in this thread:
Quote Posted by hedonicflux~~
I've already gotten ample feedback from the person who's feedback I value most, and altered the essay accordingly.
So when hedonicflux~~ writes "I'll consider the valuable opinions of Goldmoon Dawn and my most valued critic, who seem to think the essay is perfect as it is", he is talking about two people: you and another person that he considers his "most valued critic".
In fact, you don't even need the very first post: "the opinions of Goldmoon Dawn and my most valued critic, who seem..." "Seem", not "seems". Plural. More than one person.
That enough for you, or are you looking to make even more of a fool of yourself?
faetal on 30/9/2016 at 14:43
Quote Posted by hedonicflux~~
I'll consider that, as well as the valuable opinions of Goldmoon Dawn
and my most valued critic, who seem to think the essay is perfect as is.
All important bit of reading comprehension.
Goldmoon Dawn on 30/9/2016 at 15:19
OK, I want some of what you are smoking too!!!!!
Vivian on 30/9/2016 at 15:22
actually genuinely laughed out loud
Vivian on 30/9/2016 at 15:26
(sorry goldmoon)
Goldmoon Dawn on 30/9/2016 at 16:09
Quote Posted by Vivian
(sorry goldmoon)
awww its ok Viv! :D
