Makahlua on 13/4/2006 at 19:51
..well at least up until about 1/2 though [that ending place]. Takes some liberties with canon, but I've just spent the past few hours reading it, and I've liked it quite a bit. Give it a shot! :thumb:
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http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2053782/1/)
Note for the ADD people among us : it's loooooooooonnnnnnnnnng, you might wanna read one chapter at a time ...
TheGreatGodPan on 13/4/2006 at 22:24
Fan-fiction does not count as "novelization".
SD on 13/4/2006 at 23:51
I stopped reading, and started wishing terminal illness on the writer, at this point:
Quote Posted by Second Paragraph, First sentence
"You're apointment to FEMA should be finnalized within the week...
How about everyone else? :D
liquidfear on 14/4/2006 at 00:04
Well, I had to see if he'd taken the GEP gun, the crossbow, or the sniper rifle. I mean, c'mon.
Kuja on 14/4/2006 at 04:23
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Fan-fiction does not count as "novelization".
Unfortunately, it seems his "personal contribution" has been to add a love story according to Chapter 44 (When I skipped ahead) :
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V sighed, "You make it sound too easy." She showed him the numerous places where she had been shot, JC and MJ-12 inflicted. JC felt a slight pang of regret as he remembered the time, not more than a week ago, when they had been enemies. "Politics" had brought her over to the "good" side, which served as a factor in their relationship. Could such politics make her his enemy again just as quickly?
No, JC instantly thought, We love each other. It's different now. Conspiracy or no.
Love. Ever since he'd graduated from the academy, JC hadn't even spared such things a single thought. There had been a girl in the academy that he'd liked, but he had never worked up the nerve to ask her out, and the academy itself obstructed social interaction. UNATCO, of course, couldn't condone relationships. Now that he thought about it, if he had acted on his feelings, MJ-12 would have quickly terminated the relationship. Through any means possible. This, however, was something they could only touch through bullets. Erica--V could look out for herself, but he swore that he would die before he let anything happen to her.
Heh, at least his spelling and grammer get better later on, even if the story goes downhill ... ;)
DarkForge on 14/4/2006 at 09:15
Maybe it's slipping my mind, but who the hell is "V" anyway? :confused:
I don't know about anyone else, but I always thought that if JC had any opportunity for romance in the game, it would've been with Sandra.
Qaladar on 14/4/2006 at 09:27
No way... the door woman at the Lucky Money totally wanted him.
AxTng1 on 14/4/2006 at 11:27
I killed Chad MANY MANY times and still Nico doesn't want to know.
WHAT AM I DOING WRONG?
DarkForge on 14/4/2006 at 16:24
Quote Posted by Qaladar
No way... the door woman at the Lucky Money totally wanted him.
There's a difference between romance and a booty call! :cheeky:
Vraptor7 on 14/4/2006 at 19:26
It's uhh ...
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"We've had to endure much, you and I, but soon there will be order again: A new age. Aquinas spoke of the mythical City on the Hill, soon that city will be a reallity and we will be crowned it's kings."
The man in white thought about this, and decided to correct himself.
"Or better then kings. Gods."
... not working for me :erg:
