Comments/Input/Mockery welcome...

LashBot21x on 20/7/2006 at 03:12

Hey.. I was hoping you guys could give me feedback on a video I posted on youtube. It's essentially the beginning of a film me and my friends are undertaking. It's just for fun, but eh. (it's the black&white one...)

(http://www.youtube.com/user/Lasher7628)

Cookie Dough on 20/7/2006 at 05:23

Em, it wouldn't load completely for me.

Jackablade on 20/7/2006 at 16:55

It's alright, except when you switch to the real world and you can hear the buzzing of the microphone. If you could somehow edit out the buzz, while keeping the sounds that you want (stomp of the foot, click of the camera) the film would be much better. Keep it up.

Stitch on 20/7/2006 at 17:09

My advice:

* Slow that camera the hell down. You need to take your time to establish a good shot.
* Redo the real world sound, as it is currently jarring.
* Drop this angsty goth shit and stick to what you know, like the harrowing tale of a malproportioned testicle.

Also: When presenting your masterpiece to the world at least have the courtesy to link to it directly.

LashBot21x on 20/7/2006 at 17:36

Hmm.. I COULD work testicles into this. You know. Maybe the angst is because of the testes?

I tried to avoid overly lenghty shots because I felt it deteriorated from the overall presentation.
Like an MST3k episode where they ripped on a movie for carrying on a shot way too long... *shrug*

Does anyone know a way to get rid of the white-noise sound from the microphone?