Tocky on 10/10/2010 at 15:20
Then you shouldn't have a name that sounds like the slang for "call you". ;)
Vivian on 11/10/2010 at 10:16
Dudes, thanks for the feedback! Criticisms noted. I'd been trying to write something for ages, so this was more of a practice exercise in writing a complete-ish short-form story centred around an easily definable event (breakfast) and an excuse to throw some vague allusions around. Tocky - the wings are powered by space-muscle of some kind, so the power-to-weight ratio can be whatever it needs to be (but hence the vague reference to having to eat and drink a lot more than normal).
henke on 11/10/2010 at 13:54
Quote Posted by Vernon
even a midget could get a bigger fistful into his gob
A midget-fistful or a normal-size-person-fistful?
Vernon on 11/10/2010 at 13:58
As much as I would love to personally stuff a midget full of nuts, I meant one of their soft, delicate pawfuls, not a fully-grown, hirsute man-hand
